Friday, November 07, 2008

Shiver

I hide my feelings 
like a dog in the rain
pacing until he goes
insane.
I feel the swelling up
of glass inside of me.
I sit, 
I talk to the moon at night. 
And you, 
you,
you have no clue. 
Its gotten cold outside lately, 
and you, you have, no clue. 

3 comments:

BingoJimmy said...

Does it need that last line?

inbetweendreams said...

Nope, it sure doesn't.. I didn't think so until you pointed it out.. I can sum up that extra line with this,
I listen to a lot of the mountain goats..

inbetweendreams said...

So, it's more like a song. I plan to do something with the "songs" I have written that creep into my regular writing. With my mac, of course.